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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-02-12 07:37 PM


  Redemption and Happiness

Redemption lies in this snowy,
winter-mountain forest,
dazzling realm of radiant
  purity...
exquisitely trimmed  
in bright-clear moonlight,
and Nature’s simple truth.

Open your mind and heart,
to touch the face of
  happiness.


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Bobby Jordan
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1 posted 2008-02-12 07:45 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

This is well done.  Sometimes I'll go to the woods.  I really do.  It's always a good time.

Bobby

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-02-12 07:58 PM


yes!!!
ArtSolstice
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3 posted 2008-02-13 04:48 PM


A pleasure to read, especially

"dazzling realm of radiant
  purity...
exquisitely trimmed  
in bright-clear moonlight,
and Nature’s simple truth."

Always the forests are this, the "dazzling realm of radiant purity...

Well said!

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-02-14 03:51 AM


Wonderful...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-02-14 04:00 AM


Open your mind and heart,
to touch the face of
  happiness.

truly splendid words here Bruce... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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