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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-02-12 05:05 PM


   Nach dem Sturm

A lone pine-shadow
falls across a simple
  snowy bench
near the frozen mereā€¦

Reclamation!


[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (02-12-2008 07:12 PM).]

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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-02-12 07:57 PM


!!!
beautiful.

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2 posted 2008-02-12 08:18 PM


Bruce~
The minimalistic nature of this one
is a perfect fit~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2008-02-12 09:03 PM


Bruce

Sometimes the most simple things are the most beautiful - and your words prove that.

Alison

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-02-13 07:38 AM


Impressive work, dear Bruce!
Even desolation seen through your pen
acquires beauty.
Nach dem Sturm brauchen wir Mut!

love
Margherita



Thalen
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5 posted 2008-02-13 07:45 AM


Sehr gut!

This is a wonderful work of nature poems.
I enjoy is loving simplicity, and I belive you have a real talent for this.

~Thalen.

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6 posted 2008-02-13 10:11 AM


indeed

a joy to read

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7 posted 2008-02-13 10:49 AM


I bow to a master imager.
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8 posted 2008-02-13 11:24 AM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2008-02-13 04:39 PM


A fine impression captured beautifully!
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10 posted 2008-02-14 02:22 AM


SIMPLY magnificent.
              Ida

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