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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-02-12 04:07 PM



V Day


I wonder if you really know
the unseen side of me,
the cloak of love that hides behind
the spirit that you see.

I wonder if you really know
I bathe in thoughts each night,
with arms in hold, imagining
a valentine's delight.

Sometimes I wonder to myself
if ever there will be
another's feel to still this heart
into eternity.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-02-12 04:17 PM


M

Everything comes to She who waits,Judging by your posts of late, I'm sure it must seem like you have been waiting in the wings for an eternity & your mettle and resolve has been /is being tested to the limit.......I'm sure it will all come out right in the end & one day you will look back on this etc, etc....Keep your chin up

Regards

John

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2008-02-12 05:22 PM


I understand your feelings. I wonder the  same thing about myself. But, I am sure there will be another who will steal your heart away.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-02-12 05:36 PM


I'm sure it will happen...I believe in you...I believe that your desires will find a kindred spirit...believe it...James
miscellanea
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4 posted 2008-02-12 06:35 PM


another beautiful write, M.  

    Thanks for answering my post.  I'm glad you're still subbing.  You'd be great!   The Language Arts/Reading sounds right up your alley.  Lucky kids!  March is just around the corner...  

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-02-12 07:08 PM


Fine imagery!:

‘cloak of love’;

‘thought-bathing’;

‘heart(s) into eternity’;

Applause!

TomMark
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6 posted 2008-02-12 08:10 PM


Beautiful!!!
insect
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7 posted 2008-02-12 09:11 PM


I love the flow of this
I love your precious write
I'll send you a special kiss
And hug you nice and tight


Thanks for sharing!
Happy V Day

Alison
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8 posted 2008-02-12 10:20 PM


M

You show so much vulnerability in this poem - it touches my heart.

A

Fareed
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9 posted 2008-02-12 11:23 PM


Short and strong.
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