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effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2008-02-12 08:12 AM



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When I said I hadn't done it
You said that isn't true
Who are you trying to kid
I know you did

Because someone has been watching you...


You see, I have had you followed
Everywhere that you have been
Now I have got the proof
So why don't you admit the truth

Because I'm telling you that you've been seen...


All right, I hold my hands up
You have got me bang to rights
It is because I am so old
And have been feeling the cold


That I have been wearing your tights.......

© Copyright 2008 John Lawrence - All Rights Reserved
simon
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1 posted 2008-02-12 08:29 AM


Love the way you set this up so that it goes from a brooding 'Big Brotherish' paranoia to a genuinly funny ending.

Enjoyed...

Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 2008-02-12 08:45 AM


John,

Funny.  This one is well played out.

Bobby

effjayel
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3 posted 2008-02-12 09:12 AM


Thanks Guys...glad to have put a smile on your faces..

Cheers

John

passing shadows
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4 posted 2008-02-12 11:35 AM


cute

TomMark
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5 posted 2008-02-12 11:56 AM


gooooood. and funny.
Margherita
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6 posted 2008-02-12 12:28 PM


Thanks for the smiles!

love
Margherita

effjayel
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7 posted 2008-02-12 03:55 PM


Passing S,   glad it worked for you

Margherita, That makes me happy ( smiling here) to hear it made you smile...

Tomtoo

Thanks & I have to fess up here, it is a true story & Yes it was me....Noooo, not the being followed bit, that was made up... Many moons ago I used to work outdoors in this wicked english weather and it was the only way to keep my dangly bits ( that would be legs Thomas !) warm when I was 40 feet up a ladder...

See I don't always be sad, I dedicate this funny one to you for replying to the good & bad stuff I make you read....Thank You kind Sir...

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2008-02-12 06:07 PM


This was great!  A smart man, puts his well being before his ego...or his tights!

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
9 posted 2008-02-12 06:18 PM


Thanks TD, I'm just glad I did not fall off the ladder & end up in the ER room, the tights I could getaway with I think, but how would I explain the bra !!! LOL...
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2008-02-12 07:44 PM


You had me going there, for awhile! Then the hilarious conclusion! lol

In the past, I have worn my wasband's long john's in sub-zero weather! ~ Even to bed! Hmmm, I wonder if that is the reason why he is now my 'X'.

Loves 'n laughs,

Linda

effjayel
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11 posted 2008-02-16 11:09 AM


Linda

Was husband? That's a new one on me..way I hear it, reason was Him wearing your dress at the mall, no???? *grin*

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