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I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02
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nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-02-11 11:15 PM



Dear GOD,
     Why was my life chosen to be messed up? I Don't deserve this life,I try to do things right. I can't be perfect you know. Just because I messed  up one time means I have a crappy life? Did you plan to pick off my biggest hero? Or did your finger slip? Do you not want me to find love? If so why me ...I'm regular I deserve the feeling of being loved too. Did i mess  up that  bad  did I? Just take me now save me the time, the emotions,the pain. If this was all my fault I can understand. But why choose one teenager in a small town with his own emotional problems...Well I guess I
Should go now , I'm going to finish the suffering now.


P.S. There are more of us that Believe...

~-Keagan-~

© Copyright 2008 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-02-11 11:40 PM


Yo Gabriel,

Is Cornfields anywhere near Peoria, or is it closer to Normal?  Nice work on your poem, I like it.

Bobby

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
2 posted 2008-02-12 01:20 AM


gabriel ypur pen is yielding enough.


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