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insect
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0 posted 2008-02-11 06:28 PM




your butterfly's

the butterfly's that are in your eyes
enhance your smile with sweetness and style
surrounded by your hair silk brown that travels down
your face so soft as tender winds blow the tips aloft

the love you give is why I live
when every day of that moment you say
i love you I know you do
because you can't disguise your butterfly's



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miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2008-02-11 08:00 PM


I like your rhyming scheme and sweet poem.
One can't be romantic!

miscellanea

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-02-11 08:59 PM


beautiful and romantic.
enjoyed
Tom

amusemi
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3 posted 2008-02-11 09:07 PM


Cool!
Parker
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4 posted 2008-02-14 11:15 PM


Who's on your mind brother....
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with you
5 posted 2008-02-15 01:14 AM


hey hey hey

enjoyed this very much!

where have you been?!

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