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Open Poetry #42

punchlines for melodies

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2008-02-11 01:03 AM

Angry clown
wearing your frown
upside down

understanding the riddle
undoing the rhyme
finishing the tale
and picking up the dime

trying to cry but,,,
they make you laugh
finding solutions
without doing the math

not as happy as
you'd like to be
trading punch lines
for melodies

~~~kingsangel~~~

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-02-11 06:04 AM

Well I did the math Julie, and to me it adds up to a very good post, you did your homework on this one...

John

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-02-11 09:08 AM

that's how I feel sometimes

good write Julie

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