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Open Poetry #42

"To Break Away"

Arius Miura de Galdri
Member

since 2007-07-04

Posts 90
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-02-10 09:37 PM

"To Break Away"

I wonder, should I run away
And start my life anew?
Or should I press on wearily
Beneath the shade of you?

I wonder what the future holds
And will I know my place?
Or am I trapped by mem'ries,
Haunted by your smiling face?

I wonder, if I break away
And put the past behind,
My loved ones, will they understand,
And put me from their minds?

Or will they do as I have done
And let life slip away
While vainly hoping I'll return
Some distant, joyous day?

AMdG

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-10 09:38 PM

very Powerful Write!

ARCTIC WIND

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-02-10 09:39 PM

wow

lots to ponder

the choice is never easy

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-02-10 10:07 PM

Yes, there is much to think about in this beautifully written poem.

Alison

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-02-10 11:44 PM

No one should live in someone elses shadow.
Ida

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-02-11 06:02 AM

This is very good, I can relate..well done.

John

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