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SilhouetteMarquis
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 32


0 posted 2008-02-10 07:35 PM


In this silly little box of mine
Lives on a story, clandestine.
The comatose to cross the line
A burnt out image, where no light shine
A spirit's fall into the west
These raw emotions, now a test
A soul's possessed is truly bless'd
Unless the soul is mine.

The story starts with simple bliss
Love beyond a deceiving kiss.
But loving, as these words may say
There, lies a cunning force at work
The writers, not which the words portray
a hatred so much more than this.

But the hatred in us never died.
It never died.
It never died.
“It never will” in which she cried
As he lay out, she's by his side
His hopes and dreams, now garnet floor
As a note stood nailed to the door:
"Stay away, for you abhor
Our journey, which we can't ignore
This thickening mist in a shallow moor
I hope you've found what you're looking for
Our suffering must coincide
Because of you, he lives no more
Signed Abernathy Elinore"
But as told in fellow's local lore
Blood from love, and hate inside.

But all stories have endings, too
For corruption, now a rancid stew
Your anguish and disparity
Release the pain inside
Frustration overwhelms you
Where these confusions now preside
In which it never dies

Our emotions tied to what you do
By mourning, we admit the weak
(By selfishness, by self regret)
To these pages, prematurely torn by pride

By burning knives, in which you seek
When you die, you fail to see
The story has to end with you
When all shall hear your lips not speak.


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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-02-10 09:31 PM


WELCOME TO PIP!

         

    

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-02-11 06:36 AM


That was very good & I second Arctic's welcome....
Fareed
Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75

3 posted 2008-02-12 04:37 AM


I liked the beginning very much. And you stood well to it, Kudos.
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