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Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-02-10 07:08 PM


After being turned away
from the Settlement House doors,
Felix has no where to go.  

Mom won’t be home
until she gets off work
at twelve O’clock.  

He goes back to the house,
and just sits outside the door,
and shivers.  

There’s no place else for him to go.  
He has a chill, and starts to shake.

The door opens next door.  
Mrs. Jaski hollers over to him.  

“Hey Felix,
what are you doing
just sitting out there
in the wet?”

“I can’t get in the house
Mrs. Jaski,
I don’t have no key.”

“You get your tail
over here Felix,
right now.”

Mrs. Jaski fixes Felix
a hot bowl
of chicken-noodle soup.

“You just stay here
until your Mom gets home.”

“Thanks Mrs. Jaski.”

Felix’s been out too long.  

Next week
he comes down with
a nasty case of strep-throat,
he nearly dies.

He always was,
a frail child.

Bobby


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2008-02-10 08:31 PM


Poor Felix, he just can't catch a break.
When anyone in my family is sick I make them some homemade chicken soup. They all think it can cure anything and maybe it can because they think so.
                                    Ida

Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 2008-02-10 09:11 PM


Ida,

Homemade chicken soup would work wonders.  You have the secret.

Bobby

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-10 09:41 PM


I don't really Like chicken Noodle soup! lol

But I do like soup in general!





passing shadows
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4 posted 2008-02-10 09:45 PM


well I'm sure glad someone's looking out for Felix

what an angel


Bobby Jordan
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5 posted 2008-02-10 10:05 PM


Artic Wind,

Well, Felix is glad you don't like chicken-noodle soup.  It means more for him.  Felix doesn't like to share his chicken-noodle soup.

Bobby

Bobby Jordan
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6 posted 2008-02-10 10:10 PM


Passing shadows,

Yes, Mrs. Jaski was an angel.  She was a saint.

In fact, the whole neighborhood looked after Felix, principally due to his fragility.  He'd break all the mothers hearts just looking at him.

Now he's a fragile old man, and the hood is still looking out for him.

Bobby



JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-02-11 03:40 AM


Enjoyed...always nice to have a friend...James
effjayel
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8 posted 2008-02-11 06:08 AM


I was worried there for a minute, I am so glad Mrs Jaski is watching out for Felix, I bet the soup hit the spot too...
Bobby Jordan
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9 posted 2008-02-11 07:53 AM


James,

I'm pleased you enjoyed the soup, and story.

Friends are the greatest.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bobby

Bobby Jordan
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10 posted 2008-02-11 07:55 AM


John,

The soup was great.  Mrs. Jaski was a good cook.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-02-12 01:48 AM


wonderful Bobby... I'm pleased Felix got some soup... I like Chicken-Noodle soup! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bobby Jordan
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12 posted 2008-02-12 09:03 AM


RDB,

Thanks Hon.  I like Chicken Noodle Soup too.

Felix enjoyed his soup.

Bobby

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