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Whisper Softly
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Whisper Softly By Paul Wilson Whisper softly the winds will carry your words far Shout from the mountaintops your words will echo back to where you are Look beyond the clouds above into the genesis of tomorrow’s birth Close your eyes to yesterdays death live your life for all it’s worth Cast your hopes and dreams upon a midnight star The opportunity to change where you’re going…who you are Let the rain cleanse your soul let the Sun nurture you with love Spread your wings and fly forever free like a dove the bird of peace from above Come again some cool Spring morn fly upon the winds of time Whisper softly words anew forever captured in rhyme ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-11-2008 10:19 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed .....   |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Paul, these are truly beautiful words and they touched my heart. It is timely too. And then it's just an hour before midnight, I might give it thought now!  love Margherita  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Artic Wind...Thanks very much for reading and your reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Thank you sir for your reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...I really hope your dreams come true cast upon the midnight star. Thank very much for reading and your touching reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Paul, this is absolutely beautiful. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how soft this is! much love I have for this one Paul! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
"Just learning, so please be patient with me.I just try too write with feelings from my heart and hope that my poems help too make things better in some way for the people that read them. " Paul I copied your critique message in here for this reason: This one was definitely written from the heart & that is just where it hit me. It is so beautiful it almost moved me to tears, and yes, I am a whole lot better off now having read it...serious applause for this my friend and whatever you do, keep posting....Many thanks John |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ I saw the title to this one last evening, and saved it for this morning to read~ Oh my ... I am ever pleased to read this beauty~ How beautifully you ink your thoughts~ I am particularly fond of 'whispers'~ Have a beautiful day, poet~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
effjayel...It's been awhile since I saw my critique message, I wrote that about 3-4 years ago. Even though I feel like I have improved in my writting, I still feel like I have a long way to go to measure up to some of the great poets here. So glad you liked this poem and could get something out of it. When I write I try my best to relate to the person that is gonna read it. Alot of times I try to become one with the reader and feel what others are going thru be it happy or sad feelings. Again thanks a bunch for reading and your moving reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...So glad you saved this to read this morning. Your replies are always so uplifting and motivating to me...Paul right back to you~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Glad you could relate to this poem. Your replies are always a pleasure too read. Thanks so much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Paul... this is very very beautiful!! I'm keeping it in my library for another read... just lovely ! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Paul the Poet ~ Your inspirational words are "forever captured in rhyme".  Giving you a big Valentine's Day hug, Linda |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
pure, soft, beautiful and meant deep. love the read. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Spectacular imagery here. Love this. K |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
You have no idea how much light this poem brought to my life today. I'm so glad I stopped in. Thank you, hugs, Marti |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
a bump up for this lovely piece of work."late" |
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