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Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2008-02-09 08:45 PM



The Anthem of my Soul
By the Southern Cross

I believe I am everything I know,
that "I am a part of all that I have met,"
and that all the friends I will ever have
walk beside me wherever I go.
I believe I am a part
of everything there is and was,
that you are also part of me,
that You and I are universal.
I believe that all of our religions
are either borrowed or made up,
that al divinities we worship,
and all the demons that we fear,
live only in ourselves.
I believe that Time will always win.
I believe that everything will pass.
I believe that nothing lasts forever,
In Nature, in People and in Change.
I believe all Life goes back from where it came.

And I believe true friendship is for Life ...
And I believe that someone somewhere deeply loves me,
Even if I do not know her name,
that Joy that I will bring is needed,
that by someone I am being sought.

Floating in my fantasy of Love
Southern Cross

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2008-02-09 08:59 PM


May I put my smile and nod to that wonderful anteum.  Shoulder to shoulder...nicely done!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-02-09 09:12 PM


Forever and always, amigo, we are friends, and now, as much as when I first read them, these words touch me deeply.
Forever Hugs, Kacy

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2008-02-09 09:18 PM


"I believe...
  I am a part of all that I have met...

  of everything there is and (ever) was...
  that You and I are universal."

I heartily concur!

nice 'write,' Jaime!

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
4 posted 2008-02-09 10:10 PM


Thank you MS, TD, and Sec.
I put in many hours reconstructing my defunct profile.
And I must have screwed up, because apparently email notification isn't working, even though I thought I checked it, but maybe it is Jaws?
... I don't even know if anyone can still reach me through the system.
What if Pip just swallowed my past activity on the board! O dear O dear!
:--------)

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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5 posted 2008-02-09 11:29 PM


beautiful, again!!!
Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-02-09 11:32 PM


Jaime Fradera,

This is fine writing.  You do good work.

Bobby

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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7 posted 2008-02-10 11:15 AM


Enjoyed your Writing Jamie!

ARCTIC WIND

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