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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-02-09 07:10 PM

I surrender up unto the means
of keeping love with me
and breathe within the passion feel
to fuel the flames of need.

Not me but you who stokes the fire
and enflames a woman’s mind
until I think I’m bound to die
on this roller coaster love/desire.

Up, up, and there to stay
a moment, hour, I cannot say
but time is but a dream today
and love always goes away.

It’s history and yet it’s not
for still the flames are hot
and the snap, crackle, pop,
now tied into a knot.

Come, come, let’s untie
this bubble of desire
and now release the mind
into a new and better life.

But mind wishes not to sleep
in the fullness of peace
and marches on to the beat
of life after the heat.

Fire and flames and ecstasy
and time dissipates the feel
because too intense the honesty
displayed in a lover’s dream!

Helen / 10 February 2008

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-02-09 09:45 PM

Helen

Wonderful writing.
You swept along on this passionate piece.

Thank you,
Alison

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2008-02-09 09:58 PM

"...time is but a dream today
and love always goes away...."

all of life can be a dream. love can be the best and the worst of dreams.

I wish you all the best.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2008-02-10 04:55 AM

Thank you so much, Alison!

Icebox - Hmm? I think all of life IS a dream never mind "can be" but we will find out for sure in the course of time. Thank you for reading.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-02-10 05:29 AM

Enjoyed...James

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2008-02-10 07:36 AM

Wow! Love this! To the library in a trot!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-02-10 08:28 AM

Wow, dear Helen, I love your surrendering!!! Fantastic insightful poem really.
Your awareness is sharp on all levels.

love and hugs
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-02-10 02:36 PM

When you have done all that you can do in any situation in life, surrendering can be sweet for it can offtimes end our suffering.

"Not me but you who stokes the fire
and enflames a woman’s mind
until I think I’m bound to die
on this roller coaster love/desire."

~ Oh, I do so know what you mean!

Honey, when you are "Up, up" may you be "there to stay"!!!

Loving hug,
Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-10 02:38 PM

Enjoyed the read and thoughts!

I surrender up unto the means
of keeping love with me
and breathe within the passion feel
to fuel the flames of need.............."

And the powerful write full of emotion.

Yet again!, its always good to let it out

on paper that is. lol

ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

9 posted 2008-02-10 03:06 PM

Thank you all so much for your wonderful replies! There are things we know but do not know and then all we can do is just wait until we do know. I guess that doesn't make sense but I've a feeling that it will in time.

Helen

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