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Love of Far Away
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Love of Far Away |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love of Far Away Love of far away come and visit me today and put a smile on my face and a song within my heart. I've been busy missing you and my love is being true and it pains me so much to be apart. I remember when in the pool of love we'd swim, soothing the desires living in my heart. So please come to me today my love from far away and remind me as to why you're my sweetheart. JamesLee 09February 2008 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely James and ... it looks like half an apple how you arranged your lines ... so it means you are calling out on the other half. Was that your purpose? (there is a saying that God made us all half apples, so that we need to find the other half, meaning that our true soulmate does exist - nice thought isn't it - especially when one is so in love like you) love Margherita  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Ah, she called. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, I don't think you need any reminding but you do need "her". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Margherita, Tom Mack and Honeybunch for the wonderful responses... my honey lives far away and only visits occasionally, and sometimes I miss her more than others...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
James this is lovely you write so well of love |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, Sweet poem. Nice shape too. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah James.. you may be missing her but somehow I think she is missing you more.. lovely words here.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lady, Bobby and Roniece for the wonderful responses...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ 'I've been busy missing you' Oh ... I like that line~ Hope your gal visits soon~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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