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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-02-09 06:51 AM



you were a honeymoon billboard
in that hat and those legs
that went all the way to canada

and I was the lead air guitar
at the stop light auditorium
you smiled at my solo presentation

and said it seemed knotty too
and that I spelled that wrong
but you would teach me the other

if I would just turn the music down
and give you time to adjust yourself
to something with a proper mood

to make your fingers turn into words

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daark

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1 posted 2008-02-09 08:50 AM


Dark...Enjoyed. Deep thoughts emerge from your writting...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-02-09 09:12 AM


Paul, humble thanks sir
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3 posted 2008-02-09 09:52 AM


I'd smile at your solo too
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-02-09 10:03 AM


ms ps..thank you for the smile babe
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5 posted 2008-02-09 10:29 AM


made me think of piano music...
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-02-09 11:21 AM


ms suesea, yes thank you babe
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7 posted 2008-02-09 12:44 PM


brilliant write
you have a tasty mind

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-02-09 03:33 PM


ms kahlil, thanks for the eyes here
Margherita
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9 posted 2008-02-09 03:45 PM


you play very creatively and I could see you as the winner in a word championship

love
Margherita

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10 posted 2008-02-09 03:59 PM


ms mar...thanks lady friend
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11 posted 2008-02-09 11:56 PM


Most wonderful - You play beautifully and the volume is perfection.

A

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12 posted 2008-02-10 12:46 PM


Beautiful. what if those fingers turned into  strings?
Very beautiful and the poem is seeing daylight now.
love the read.
Tom

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-02-10 07:02 AM


ms ali-san, thanks little one

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friend TomMark, thanks to you sir for the read

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14 posted 2008-02-10 03:57 PM


Legs that go all the way to Canada.  Wouldn't mind some visual on this...James
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15 posted 2008-02-10 04:10 PM


Enjoyed this makes me want to turn words to flowers and songs to a gentle caress.

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16 posted 2008-02-10 04:41 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts Dark Stranger!



Always a joy to read...

ARCTIC WIND

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17 posted 2008-02-10 05:22 PM


friend James, thanks sir

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dennis, thank you for the read


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aw, thanks my friend for the touch

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18 posted 2008-02-10 11:39 PM



solo?
stranger darlin'
you are best at duets

love this


Dark Stranger
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19 posted 2008-02-11 06:08 AM


ladyone...thank you ms..nice to see you back.
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20 posted 2008-02-12 01:50 AM


very nice Mr Daark!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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21 posted 2008-02-12 06:17 AM


ms r & b thank you for reading
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22 posted 2008-02-12 06:04 PM


Fingers playin a fine tune to the beauty of your written verses.  Lovely writing D.
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23 posted 2008-02-12 10:53 PM


ms gs, thanks babe
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