Open Poetry #42 |
my first poems |
Michyla Junior Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 15qld, australia. |
LAST KISS from that last kiss, i knew i had your heart, but it's not hard to miss, we are so far apart, i know in my mind, the kiss meant nothing, though the past is far behind, you're still my everything, my mind is often wrong, but my heart now knows, i won't be gone for too long, before to you it shows, for now i can only wait, the future will come soon, and also my secret fate, will be your hefty boon. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michyla~ Welcome to our circle of poetic friends~ Nice writing ... your name is lovely also~ Enjoy your stay with us~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Michyla. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice entry poem welcome to Passions! |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Michyla, I'd go over this, and try it with Standard English Language punctuation and capitalization. That would make it easier to read. Welcome to here. The idea is fine. Bobby |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I am one to believe that it's the raw emotion that makes our words and feelings .... POETRY IN MOTION! Welcome and keep up the good work. Ct In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05 |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Michyla, Your first efforts are way beyond what mine were. Lovely poem, filled with much emotion - I like it. Welcome to P.I.P. - please continue to share and let us enjoy the growth that will come to you. It has happened to us all, I bet. We grow together. Welcome, Alison |
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Michyla Junior Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 15qld, australia. |
thanks guys. personally i don't like it, it just seems too.. simple? or something along those lines. my sister's poems are much better, i am only getting an interest in poetry because of her. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Michyla! Welcome aboard the pip ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these seas of blue as much as I have. May this be the first of many poems that you will write. Emote away! It's good for our sense of well-being. Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP! MAY YOU HAVE FUN HERE WITH EVERYONE AND WRITING! ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michyla... simple is where we start. Depth is where we live. |
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Michyla Junior Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 15qld, australia. |
thanks evryone. the poetry everyone on here writes is beautiful. top notch guys. =) the sun is for the days.. the moon for the nights.. but you are forever. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Welcome Aussie friend to these pages of blue, enjoyed your write; hope you enjoy your stay and journey with us all, it is a great place to visit and relax. Have a wonderful day. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hello Michyla... welcome to our pages blue... sorry for the late welcome, just noticed your icon blinking at me! lovely poem, keep up the good writing... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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