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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-02-08 07:38 PM


   Winter Woods

Take pause
from the ever
grasping world,
(in a micro-slice of
timeless wonder)
to become one…
with the gentle
  light
and silent soul
of a starry evening
Winter forest,
and disturb Nature’s
boundless spirit…
only with your
finest dreams!


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-02-08 07:43 PM


Now THIS is definitely one for the library!
Peaceful, harmonious relaxing thoughts....

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-02-08 09:12 PM


relaxes me.
        Ida

RogueandPoet
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3 posted 2008-02-11 01:33 AM


This poem is hardly a second hand bargain, it shines!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-02-11 03:48 AM


"only with your finest dreams."...enjoyed...James
effjayel
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5 posted 2008-02-11 05:55 AM


This puts me in a gentle, restful frame of mind..much enjoyed....

John

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6 posted 2008-02-11 07:09 AM


SHDP-

VERY! relaxing, I loved this one very much. The one minute of the beauty of the Winter woods is just so beautiful!

Thank you for the relaxing, cool breeze and Beauty of the Winter Woods!



ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2008-02-11 07:14 AM


if it would just warm up a tiny bit I would take a walk in those woods

M

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displaced
8 posted 2008-02-11 09:01 AM


I miss taking pause

I think I will do that soon

ArtSolstice
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9 posted 2008-02-11 01:43 PM


I've gotten lost in this poem. It's so beautifully written.
Bobby Jordan
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10 posted 2008-02-11 02:26 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

This is very nice.  I'd not capitalize "winter".

Bobby

TomMark
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11 posted 2008-02-11 03:03 PM


Beautiful. I drank it and spill my coffee.
Beautiful always.

The Lady
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12 posted 2008-02-12 10:37 PM




"Take pause
from the ever
grasping world"

fits my spirit tight tonight poet
this is a time of remembering for me

beautifully done

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13 posted 2008-02-13 12:17 PM


This is a winter that calls to me
and you paint the pictures with such beauty.

Alison

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