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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2008-02-08 09:56 AM



MONEY VERSUS TIME , THE QUESTION IN THE SAND

WHICH IS THE KEY, WHILE WE`RE ON THIS LAND.

WHILE MONEY BRINGS YOU CHOICE, IT ALSO OPENS UP GREED

SQUANDERING ON GOODS, THAT REALLY YOU DON`T NEED.

TIME ITSELF CAN BE A DRAG, IF YOUR LIFE HAS NO PLACE

BUT INSTEAD OF BEING SAD, JUST REMEMBER GODS GRACE.

FOR FREE WILL IS FOR ALL , UNCONCERNED WITH GENDER AND RACE

REACH OUT AND TOUCH SOMEONE, TIME IS TO EMBRACE

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-02-08 10:35 AM


MERCURY ~ Well it's about time your little wings brought you back to the pip family fold!

Many truths is what you wrote. ~ and sage advice!

"REACH OUT AND TOUCH SOMEONE, TIME IS TO EMBRACE"

~ and this you have done! ~ and poetically at that!

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug!
EA

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2008-02-10 02:53 PM


nice flow and message.
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