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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2008-02-08 06:32 AM



something about you walking away
and looking over your shoulder
is what might ruin my composure

now that I know your preferences
and that everything else matches
when our minds are on holiday

somewhere we shouldn't be together
but since we are and there is time
we might as well make it memorable

and feel like it was broken before
and that we are only fixing it
for a few hours of each other's day

before we break it again on purpose


____________

daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-08 07:00 AM


somewhere we shouldn't be together
but since we are and there is time
we might as well make it memorable

yes, Mr Daark... I think I would like to make it memorable with you !     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-02-08 08:37 AM


But the question is....was she wearing red?
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-02-08 11:51 AM


Your tuning is light and seductive!

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2008-02-08 12:29 PM


Your "G" was Spot on!


EA

TomMark
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5 posted 2008-02-08 01:44 PM


Beautiful. from dark to emotional.
love the read.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-02-08 03:27 PM


ms r & b, thank you babe for wearing this on your eyes.

___________

ms muse, perhaps a bit of blush here and there?  thanks ms

___________

ms mar, thank you babe for the eyes


_____________

ms EA...shhhhhhhhhh you will make me blush


_______________

TomMark, thank you sir

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-08 04:28 PM


Thanks for the Good Read

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-02-08 05:33 PM


aw...thanks to you for your eyes
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9 posted 2008-02-10 01:30 AM


Sometimes

we just gotta take those moments
as they are offered.

A

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-02-10 07:01 AM


ms ali-san...so...when ya gonna offer? thanks hon
The Lady
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11 posted 2008-02-10 10:37 PM



stranger darlin'
time spent with you
is always memorable

and this is a lovely poem


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