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Tim
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0 posted 2008-02-08 12:06 PM



O' would it be that you could see
Into my heart, into my soul,
For deep within the me of me,
You bloom fair Rose, in love's extol.
At times it seems a life ago,
That first we kissed, lips gently pressed,
and other times it seems as though,
t'was yesterday when first was blessed,
with you my Rose, a love divine,
forever and forevermore,
I pledge to thee, I will be thine,
You are fair Rose, my heart's adore.
You are my love, you are my life,
My valentine, fair Rose, my wife.

© Copyright 2008 Tim - All Rights Reserved
jessie
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1 posted 2008-02-08 01:24 AM


so very romantic
loved it much
so beautiful

  


jessie

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-02-08 10:43 AM


You surely made her heart dance in joy with these romantic words!

Very lovely!

love
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-02-08 03:12 PM


What a lovely Valentine poem with which to gift your rose of a wife.


EA

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4 posted 2008-02-08 04:31 PM


Enjoyed this tale

ARCTIC WIND

Kahlil
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5 posted 2008-02-09 09:30 AM


This is very touching.
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6 posted 2008-02-10 01:45 AM


Beautiful.
Happy Valentine's Day to you both.

A

Denise
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7 posted 2008-02-10 01:06 PM


Breathtakingly lovely, Tim! Soooo beautiful!
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-02-10 03:55 PM


Fine romantic writing...James
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9 posted 2008-02-10 04:13 PM


The rose, a beauty to see, to smell and to feel.  The color makes no difference, all are beautiful; what lessons are there to learn
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