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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2008-02-07 11:31 PM





Mrs. Cook wore her hair swept up in a bun
Her dress covered in a long apron
Wide brim hat when she was out in her garden
Husband came home smelling of whiskey every day
Sister and I would visit her when he was at work
Kindly and small and ancient to me
Her face wore the lines of a thousand years
Tiny house kept tidy and warm
Only to turn into a shack when I reached adulthood
She was laid to rest on a sunny day
The obituary clipping is in my bible



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1 posted 2008-02-08 01:53 AM


So touching.
It's nice to be remembered.

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2 posted 2008-02-08 02:53 AM


It's nice to know somebody remembered. Very touching.
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effjayel
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3 posted 2008-02-08 05:33 AM


Tina

What a lovely touching tribute...

Unfortunately Mrs Cook & Her ilk are fast disappearing never to be replaced...The generations following Her are loath to give you the time of day, much less ask you in for tea....glad She made Her final journey on a sunshine filled day. God always shines on the rightgeous.

John

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4 posted 2008-02-08 08:01 AM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Margherita
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5 posted 2008-02-08 11:27 AM


Dear Tina, you pictured this character so well.
Beautiful tribute.

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-08 12:27 PM


Tina, I had my dear Mrs. Wilson... God bless them both.

A very touching piece of writing.

Love & compassionate hugs for all the Mrs. Cooks and Mrs. Wilsons in the world.

Linda

Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2008-02-08 12:29 PM


I wonder what ever happened to the dear 'ol lady that we used to visit....hpefully still alive and kickin'

~~~kingsangel~~~

TinaTrivett
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8 posted 2008-02-08 03:51 PM


Thanks all. Eff, you are so right about the Mrs. Cooks disappearing. When I am an 'old lady' I shall make a point to do the same. Take tea with a young person.

Earth Angel, how nice that you had a friend like mine too.

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