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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-02-07 05:28 PM




        

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Fog licks valley's skin

blindness threatens the Earth's eyes

peaks blush in sun's kiss


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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-02-07 05:48 PM


Very Lovely Margherita!



ARCTIC WIND

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2008-02-07 07:34 PM


I am especially fond of the closing line
(and image)!

applause!

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-02-07 07:39 PM



"Fog licks valley's skin

blindness threatens the Earth's eyes

peaks blush in sun's kiss"



~ Each line beared repeating!

Oh, the supreme majesty of Nature!

Sighing here,

Linda



ctowen
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4 posted 2008-02-07 07:47 PM


Made me blush too!  : )

Nice

Ct

Bobby Jordan
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5 posted 2008-02-07 08:25 PM


Margherita,

This makes excellent use of the classic haiku form--very good work.

Bobby

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6 posted 2008-02-07 08:32 PM


Words of beauty in a true art form.  Joyce
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7 posted 2008-02-07 08:33 PM


gorgeous piece and picture

I love this!

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8 posted 2008-02-07 10:39 PM


Margherita

Such beauty
in words and photo.

And in poet too.

A

Margherita
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9 posted 2008-02-08 10:39 AM


Your replies are so very kind, my dear Poet friends! Thank you!

love
Margherita

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10 posted 2008-02-08 12:26 PM


Margherita,

Amazing picture & the words are even better, one day you must teach me Haiku ..

Margherita
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11 posted 2008-02-08 06:53 PM


thank you effjayel ... it is fascinating to "pack" some meaning into just a few words.

love
Margherita

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12 posted 2008-02-09 04:26 PM


Lovely, Margherita - words and picture.

Hugs
Helen

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13 posted 2008-02-10 10:23 PM




each line is a poem in itself Margherita

beautifully done

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14 posted 2008-02-11 05:45 PM


Very much enjoyed

Charisma

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15 posted 2008-02-12 01:22 AM


it lifts the fog of discontent. i wish you a equally, if not more yielding pen in future.


Margherita
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16 posted 2008-02-12 07:36 AM


Helen, thank you
Kate, thank you:
Charisma, thank you:
Poddar, thank you:

Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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17 posted 2008-02-12 08:03 PM


I love haiku's and you write them so well! This is so beautiful!
hugs,Marti

LindsayP
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18 posted 2008-02-12 09:55 PM



Yes Margherita it is beautiful, both words and picture. well done.

Lindsay

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19 posted 2008-02-12 11:24 PM


Aesthetic!
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20 posted 2008-02-12 11:36 PM





very

well

done


.

Margherita
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21 posted 2008-02-13 07:54 AM


Marti, thank you
Lindsay, thank you
Fareed, thank you
icebox, thank you

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