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the unblind |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Looking so innocent yet her eyes full of shame wonder if she ever learned how to play her own game going over the delusions again in her mind rewinding the confusion becoming the unblind ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed this poem of yours ARCTIC WIND |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
People do so often struggle, don't they? We often wonder just what it is they're thinking. Great write! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you both for your comments...I was thinking of Brittney Spears actually when I wrote this....I see her as being blindsided and just needs to remove the blindfold!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
My poem "Cobwebs" could have been written for Her ! 'Once having hit the bottom It should come as no surprise That I cannot find a way out For the cobwebs on my eyes' I enjoyed your write. John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I read in one of the comments that you were thinking of Britney Spears when you wrote this poem. I went back to read it again, and it even had more of an impact on me. I could see her innocence but with the shame in her eyes. It is all such a sad scenario. May she get the help that she needs. ~ A touching, empathetic write.  EA |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you both for commenting. After reading it again I think maybe I will elaborate on it a bit more in another poem. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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