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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-02-07 03:19 PM


Game of Love

Standing in
the pouring rain
my life's not the same
since I lost the
game of love.
Cloudy skies and
tears in my eyes
its sad when
you lose the
game of love.
Where oh where
will I go from here,
why oh why
must this love
disappear.
Such are the results
when only one is sincere
and you're playing a
game of love.
Standing in
the pouring rain
my life never will
be the same
since I played  
and lost the
game of love.

JamesLee
07February
2008
Its a sad situation
when only one is sincere.
The above mentioned words
are not about me...
well it could be...
but its not...
thank God.



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amusemi
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1 posted 2008-02-07 03:25 PM


Great Write!
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-02-07 03:26 PM


Enjoyed the Write JamesMichael!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-07 05:53 PM


When one plays the game of love there are always risks!

You rendered this situation well, dear James.

Enjoyed.

Love
Margherita

vandana
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4 posted 2008-02-07 06:38 PM


good read
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-02-08 04:28 AM


Thank you amusemi, Artic Wind, Margherita and vandana for the wonderful responses...James
Honeybunch
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6 posted 2008-02-09 04:51 PM


I'm so glad these words are not about you.  It could be about me, however, but the sun still shines and I still smile.  Enjoyed!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-02-09 04:58 PM


Sorry to hear it may be about you Honeybunch...if in a relationship one is serious and the other one is playing a game, it is always better to find out sooner instead of later...sometimes we want to keep holding on and hoping that our love will be shared, when our hope is in letting go and trying to find someone that shares our sincerity..James
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8 posted 2008-02-10 02:27 AM


James

I agree - thank God this is not about you.

Good poem and I have been there too.

A

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-02-12 05:14 AM


Thank you Alison for sharing your thoughts and sorry to hear that your love was not reciprocated...James
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