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Zyskandar A. Jaimot
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0 posted 2008-02-07 09:22 AM



JAMES DEAN JAMES DEAN pouty lips smoking that cig...

on that screen JAMES DEAN
and i were never lovers
but we could have been just like
a car hurtles through night
lights off dangerous - like that


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-02-07 10:49 AM


Interesting poem! Welcome to Pip!

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2 posted 2008-02-07 10:55 AM


Welcome To pip!!!!

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Zyskandar A. Jaimot
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3 posted 2008-02-07 11:38 AM


to M + AW - much thanks for the reads/comments glad u thought this was of interest regards zaj


Yvette
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4 posted 2008-02-07 12:04 PM


Very brainstormy...refreshing breeze...bourderless...nice.
Zyskandar A. Jaimot
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5 posted 2008-02-07 01:06 PM


to y - much thanks for the read/comments glad it caused u to think regards zaj


1poeticjustice
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6 posted 2008-02-07 07:03 PM


Personal attack removed - Ron

[This message has been edited by Ron (02-07-2008 07:28 PM).]

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2008-02-07 07:56 PM


I'm not really sure what a "tanka" is, I confess, but I love James Dean, and you captured that elusive, rebellious, something with this.


Zyskandar A. Jaimot
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8 posted 2008-02-07 08:26 PM


to sb - much thanks for the read/comments a traditional oriental tanka would be a thought poem of 5-7-5-7-7 syllables with no title glad u enjoyed this regards zaj


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