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Grandfather's Dream
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Grandfather's Dream |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I feel Grandfather’s spirit in the wind that moves the branches, that flutters leaves of broad-leaved maple. I watch the sun rise over barren land, that was Grandfather’s farm, a farm he struggled to keep; by taking a job up north, by surviving with so little, for so long. Heavy equipment carve up the earth, fill the tranquil air with industrial noise, uproot the trees I once played in, destroy precious streams I once waded and washed my hands in. They build a “gated community”; a prison for the wealthy: was this what Grandfather envisioned when he bought this land long ago? Ruthless developers connive to leave the remaining family with empty pockets and broken hearts: was this the work of the universe unfolding as it should? I will remember the years I was connected with the life that was this sacred place. I will remember the simple things that awakened me to greater knowing. I’ll drift away from here to dream a better, greater dream. [This message has been edited by WindWalker (02-07-2008 06:02 PM).] |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
WindWalker, This is a sad, but well written description of the birth of additional ugly suburban sprawl. Well done. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, this is such a heart ache write No, the scene of today's 'prison' is not what Grandfather dreamed. It's especially horrific to see the beauty of Gaia destroyed so a mere handful can plant themselves behind such gates. May the self-imposed gated prison become their cemetery. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-07-2008 04:28 PM).] |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
sad truth. Beautiful poem. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
It's so difficult to find the words to post a sensible reply to this deeply meaningful write. It bears so much resonance, especially at this time of overdevelopment and disrespect for the land -- We see forests of exceptional beauty felled to create "Forest Run" housing development, and wildlife displaced to create a "Deer Path Homes" urbanization where the deer path used to be. Marvelous writing, WW. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another fine 'penning' from a superb talent! I am especially fond of: "I feel Grandfather’s spirit in the wind that moves the branches, that flutters leaves of broad-leaved maple." AND: "I will remember the years I was connected with the life that was this sacred place. I will remember the simple things that awakened me to greater knowing(!)" most serious and long-sustained applause!! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WindWalker~ 'I feel Grandfather’s spirit in the wind that moves the branches, that flutters leaves of broad-leaved maple.' This is just a lovely, moving write~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sometimes progress seems anything but progress. I truly believe the plants, land, and animals have many secrets and parabols to show us, if only we listen. I am sorry to hear how the sacred place of your grandfather's dream has been altered by others, but it sounds like you have many memories and dreams of your own. I very much enjoyed your poem, and am saving this in my library. Good luck to you. miscellanea |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The sad part is it doesn't have to be this way. Greed drives people to be so inconsiderate of others and of all life on this planet. If only some of your wisdom would rub off on some of these people, WindWalker. Ida |
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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
Powerful words Windwalker! I have the feeling everyones Grandfather would feel the same to see what has become of God's green Earth... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Powerful emotive write WW, very much enjoyed... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"They build a “gated community”; a prison for the wealthy:" excellent write WindWalker touching |
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