passion - in a foreign language

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Open Poetry #42

passion - in a foreign language

Zyskandar A. Jaimot
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since 2008-02-06

Posts 76
FL-USA

0 posted 2008-02-06 07:06 PM

We Celebrate Amir Rumi*

On spring-break
Our ecstasy
Once started in that
Florida seaside hotel room
Continued
Oblivious
To the rain
Which fell
Every afternoon
As pure and wet
As tears
Dripping from our eyes
Onto lips
Which tremored
From an addiction
More powerful
Than poppies
Whose petals
Dissolved
Into moments of need
When lovers
Take words out of
Each others mouths
Keeping secrets
Of shared lips
Because like
Exotic Sufis
Moved to dance from love
We must ignore even
The hot restaurants
Of reconstituted Latino menus
Singing of salsa and spice
Cooled by frozen daiquiris
And delicious ocean waves
Calling us
To break our trance
Which would surely bring death
While those silent chambermaids
Impatiently waited outside
Only to trace afterwards
With envious fingers
Our outlined embrace
From musky wetness
On silk sheets
Where we never rested.

*Amir Rumi -Sufi poet/singer
in whose memory every year
continuous song/dance happens
for 10 days/nights

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-02-06 08:19 PM

Welcome to this ever-growing circle of poets and friends~
Will look forward to reading even more of your work~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Zyskandar A. Jaimot
Member

since 2008-02-06

Posts 76
FL-USA

2 posted 2008-02-06 09:10 PM

much thanks for you read/comment regards zaj

Clang
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since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

3 posted 2008-02-07 02:06 AM

Beautiful imagry. Welcome!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-02-07 03:17 AM

\Wonderful...James

Zyskandar A. Jaimot
Member

since 2008-02-06

Posts 76
FL-USA

5 posted 2008-02-07 07:11 AM

to chang+james michael - much thanks for the reads/comments glad u enjoyed this regards zaj

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-02-07 07:02 PM

Wonderfully passionate ...

I enjoy your way of celebrating the great Rumi!

love
Margherita

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