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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there were always mountains before when you were distant places and your mind was someone else's then we found an ocean's side and turned it over to make it level on the bottom so we would be in the same dream laying down with our eyes open whispering the same names and occasionally bad words just because we could out loud with no one else above us pretending they were our only gods ____________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
so we would be in the same dream laying down with our eyes open whispering the same names mmmm.... sharing the same dream with you Mr Daark could be kinda nice! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b, thanks ms for the read..and for the nice thought. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool I like |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and occasionally bad words just because we could out loud with no one else above us pretending they were our only gods ____________ sounds like someone needs his and hers mouths washed clean  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Lovely freedom, to just be. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"so we would be in the same dream" ~ being in the same dream most assuredly augments the mutual pleasure of the lovers.  EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
there were always mountains before when you were distant places and your mind was someone else's...... Enjoyed the post DS ARCTIC WIND |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Very soft tuned  which must had smoothed the mountain!!!!very beautiful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ps, thank you for passing by here ______________ ms inky..yes with soap and gin? thanks babe ____________ ms sun, you warm me with your touch ____________ ms ea, thanks lady friend for the eyes ____________ Friend Artic, thank you so much for looking in ____________ TomMark, thank you sir for the read and comments _______________ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bad words become good words when spoken in the right tone to the right person. Liking this a lot, D. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one, am pleased |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Besides the highly captivating imagery, your words always hold deeper messages, dear Poet D. love Margherita |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
"then we found an ocean's side and turned it over to make it level on the bottom" Incredibly picturesque imagry, sir. Neptune would be proud, or maybe jealous...I like! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for the eyes _____________ ms muse' thank you for letting me take some of your time here ____________ ms vandana, thank you |
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