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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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it's always the proper in me that refuses to see the way you speak of love as if it could easily be it's always the prim in me that never quite lets go enough to feel the lust that you are eager to show one day though you might be surprised... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...enjoyed this lady vs woman view... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Mr Daark... you always make my day by reading my work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Surprises are good...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well one is not expected to be prim and proper all the time  the guy best be sitting down when you finally let loose! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Loved it ! Sometimes it is good to be a bit of both, keeps them on their toes  Ruth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, aren't you the adorable coquette! Keep 'em guessing! ~ and wanting what they think they can't have!  Love 'n hugs, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ouuuuuu! I love surprises!, I LOVE THEM!!!!!! a lot!   Enjoyed your Poem Written here, RDB! ARCTIC WIND |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Awwww, come on hon, loosen-up a little. Let's have some fun. I've been having this kind of problem with girls for a while. This is a great little poem. I like it loads. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... thank you my friend Dixie... you are such a delight! thank you Ruth... yes, a bit of both! thank you Lindalou... thank you darling girl Arctic...I love surprises too, but I always like to know what they are before hand! thank you .. Bobby... yo Bobby, I'm working on loosening up - thank you for your lovely comments.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Roniece, let the prim go and surprise him, we are not here forever. Good luck my friend. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Smiles... thanks Lindsay.. Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You know, this could have been written about me. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It's taken me a little while to get to do some reading here but you tell it how it can be for a lot of us "women folk". Now that I'm older and wiser I can truly say that I hope by now he has been surprised. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well written! serious applause!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
my sweet Sue... you are such a beautiful person.. thank you for your kind comments.. honeybunch... thank you, I'm so pleased that you have taken the time to read my work Bruce... you always make me smile, thank you x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In former times the proper and prim woman was the wife and the passionate one was the lover, both unhappy knowing of each other, but it was somehow tolerated. Now we know that the most faithful couples are those where there is also a satisfying intimate life. The lack thereof drives now not only men to seek it elsewhere, but also women. So maybe it is time to learn some lessons! I would say it's never too late, or even the sooner the better! You have touched upon a very important theme here, dear Roniece. And many can relate no doubt, men and women. Love Margherita |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, you just do what feels right at the time my friend, you will know when, we live with our pleasures and secrets each day don't we. Loved the read Roniece, you enjoy your day. Rick |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
RDB, in the olden days I believe the message was: treat 'em mean & keep 'em keen! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Roniece, my friend do you really think I believe you are always prim and proper? this is so delightful... a little tease |
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