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Open Poetry #42

An Immortal winter

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-02-06 05:44 AM

An Immortal winter

He, cursed the winter, a fatal angel,

The long winter made the sun placid
Shackled hands of trees were
                              Bound to the mellow blue.
Our roadside crazy-man
Yawned and cursed You.
Grinned the slow ice,
It was easy to entice
The dirty and old crazy-man.
We passed him
We smiled with triviality or with
                                           Pity.
He smiled back
And, please lower your eyes
     Because, his smile was beyond everything.
But
He cursed the winter
And, the snow.
We knew: why
When we saw a crazy smile on cursing lips
                                   Frozen to the immortality
.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-02-06 05:49 AM

I like your writing style Po... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

2 posted 2008-02-06 06:29 AM

thank you RDB

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2008-02-06 12:28 PM

This is very beautiful, poddarku.
I am chilled though

Tom

Zyskandar A. Jaimot
Member

since 2008-02-06

Posts 76
FL-USA

4 posted 2008-02-07 01:19 PM

to p - enjoyed this thanks for sharing regards zaj

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-07 01:51 PM

Yes Indeed, Your style of writing is cool

and Descriptive!

ARCTIC WIND

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