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shayn101
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since 2008-02-06
Posts 2


0 posted 2008-02-06 05:18 AM


Key To My Heart  <3 =]=]=]=]=]=]

I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again.

I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.

© Copyright 2008 shayn - All Rights Reserved
Michyla
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since 2008-02-06
Posts 15
qld, australia.
1 posted 2008-02-06 05:28 AM


that is very good shayn. keep it up. i will try to write one soon, but i am very tired lately so i dont know how long til i will get around to it.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-02-06 05:32 AM


Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.


Hello and welcome Shayn to our pages blue... I liked your first post here...   RDB  

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-02-06 06:54 AM


Nice...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2008-02-06 08:00 AM


Welcome! Thanks for the lovely poem offering.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-02-06 08:04 AM


Hi, Shayn! Welcome aboard the pip ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these blue seas!

This was a lovely debut poem! I am happy that he was able to open your heart to love again!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug!

Earth Angel

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2008-02-06 08:53 AM


nice first piece!

welcome to the PIP house!


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