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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2008-02-06 02:02 AM



Eros Wine
Please Click Link above to hear music and my voice recording.
Music: Spancil Hill by Howard Baer
From the album “Celtic Mystique”

    
Artist: Dante Alighieri

Eros Wine
by Linda L. Dowd

Breathe heartfelt words in to mine ears,
Bring pleasures with soft touches fine.
Place thy lips in sweet surrender,
Upon this cup of Eros wine.

Walk with me among the jasmine,
Down paths where love forever springs.
Where all is fresh, and pure, and simple,
Where spirits soar and each heart sings.

Look deep within this soul of mine,
As thou dost gaze in to mine eyes.
Behold blue pools of crystal waters,
And pluck the fruits of paradise.

Take mine hand and lead me onward,
To elysian fields at heaven’s gate.
Where we be one in vernal pastures,
And unwrapped dreams lie in await.

Breathe heartfelt words in to mine ears,
Bring pleasures with soft touches fine.
Place thy lips in sweet surrender,
Upon this cup of Eros wine.

Walk with me among the jasmine,
Down paths where love forever springs.
Where all is fresh, and pure, and simple,
Where spirits soar and each heart sings.

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Love is the unifying force which integrates
one’s soul with that of another.
~ Linda L. Dowd

© Copyright 2008 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-06 05:10 AM


Walk with me among the jasmine,
Down paths where love forever springs.
Where all is fresh, and pure, and simple,
Where spirits soar and each heart sings

oh my Lindalou... this is beautiful!!!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

poddarku
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2 posted 2008-02-06 05:10 AM


its really worth of all.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-02-06 06:53 AM


Luscious...James
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-02-06 07:52 AM


RDB ~

Thank you, Roneice! I enjoyed 'orchestrating' this one!

~ May your spirits rise and your heart sing, this coming Valentine's Day!

Love to you!
Lindalou




Earth Angel
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5 posted 2008-02-06 07:53 AM


poddarku ~

Thank you! Love is in the air!


EA

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-06 07:55 AM


James ~

"Luscious" ~ I love that word! Thank you, Hawaii Man!

May your Valentine's Day be as romantic as you are!

Linda

passing shadows
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7 posted 2008-02-06 08:55 AM


now just how creative is that!

what a beautiful work!


LindsayP
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8 posted 2008-02-06 09:35 PM



Linda how I wish I could walk down those

paths of Jasmine with you but I'm afraid it

would have to be in my wheel chair. A

beautiful poem my dear as only you can write

Love  Lindsay

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-02-07 07:26 AM


psssing shadows ~

Good morning, Dixie! I'm pleased that you enjoyed my creative efforts! Thank you for saying so!

Warm hug from the snow-bound North!

Linda

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2008-02-07 07:29 AM


Lindsay ~

You can roll 'n stroll with me down the paths of jasmine!

Love to you, Aussie Man!

Linda

Margherita
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11 posted 2008-02-07 05:47 PM


quote:
Walk with me among the jasmine,
Down paths where love forever springs.
Where all is fresh, and pure, and simple,
Where spirits soar and each heart sings


Ahh, my dear Linda Angel, you must have been peeking into Paradise to bring back enticing memories for us to savor!

This is a lovely place to be and to ... dream of!

Your inspired write brings joy. Thank you!

Baci e abbracci
Margherita

vandana
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12 posted 2008-02-07 06:39 PM


nice read
Earth Angel
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13 posted 2008-02-07 07:26 PM


Margherita ~

Love is in the air with Valentine's Day being right around the corner!

It's a time for showing loved ones that you care ~ with chocolates!!! lol

Baci e abbracci

Angelo Terrestre
p.s. Here is a Hershey's Chocolate Kiss for you!

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2008-02-07 07:26 PM


vandana ~

'Angel' curtsies! Thank you!


EA

secondhanddreampoet
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15 posted 2008-02-07 07:27 PM


fine 'classic' romanticism...

I am especially fond of:

"Breathe heartfelt words in to mine ears,
Bring pleasures with soft touches fine.
Place thy lips in sweet surrender,
Upon this cup of Eros wine."

Applause!

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2008-02-07 07:41 PM


Hi, Bruce! Thank you for saying so! ~ and for the "applause".


Linda

Bobby Jordan
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17 posted 2008-02-07 07:51 PM


Earth Angel,

This is fine work.  The only changes I would make would be to use "my" instead of "mine" for "my eyes" and "my ears".

You have a nice speaking voice.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Bobby Jordan (02-07-2008 08:35 PM).]

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2008-02-08 09:27 AM


Bobby ~

Good morning! I am pleased that you enjoyed it.
I posted 14 of my poems with music and my voice recording in Open 41 and have thoroughly enjoyed 'orchestrating' them. I have gifted my family and friends with CDs that I made and I am thrilled at their responses.

Thank you for your suggestion. I had vascillated  between using 'my' and 'mine' ~ and 'you' and 'thee' and 'thou', however I thought that the Elizabethan era would be a more romantic theme for this poem of love.

Have a great day! ~ and please give Felix and Sally a hug from me ~ and keep one for yourself!



EA

effjayel
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19 posted 2008-02-08 12:36 PM


Linda

I listened to this the other day & came back for "seconds" and realised I had not left any feedback. I hope you don't take this the wrong way but I love it so much, I'm going to have it  played when I go to the great library in the sky.......

Loved it !

John

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2008-02-08 03:10 PM


John ~

Aha! I'm so pleased that you came back for seconds and have now expressed how much you enjoyed it!

Your nice comments were very much appreciated!

May your life be as sweet as Eros wine!

Linda

Honeybunch
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21 posted 2008-02-09 04:29 PM


"Walk with me among the jasmine,
Down paths where love forever springs.
Where all is fresh, and pure, and simple,
Where spirits soar and each heart sings."

Oh, I'd love to walk through all that but I think it's only for when we can fly!  Enjoyed your uplifting words as always, Linda, and I will dream of that beautiful place.

simon
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22 posted 2008-02-09 08:26 PM


Really enjoyed your words, the music & your VOICE!
Earth Angel
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23 posted 2008-02-10 12:58 PM


Thanks, Honey!

Sweet dreams!

Loving hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2008-02-10 01:00 PM


simon ~

I am so pleased that you were able to hear the recording! ~ and that you liked it!

I appreciate your kind comments! Thank you!

Sending a hug-o-love across the Atlantic,

Linda

Artic Wind
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25 posted 2008-02-13 07:17 PM


Its Perfect for the Valentine Day!

I love this one!, The voice was a beauty, thank

you for this lovely and beautiful Read EA!

Love the Voice.......

     

ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
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26 posted 2008-02-13 10:50 PM


soulfully delightful
a treat for the senses
much enjoyed

Earth Angel
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27 posted 2008-02-14 08:07 AM


ARCTIC WIND ~

Thanks, AW, for that blast of fresh, arctic air! I am so pleased that you were able to hear the recording and that you liked it so much!

Giving you a Happy Valentine's Day hug,

EA

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2008-02-14 08:09 AM


Goddess ~

I'm glad that I was able to treat your senses, this Valentine's Day! lol

Thank you, Michele!

Linda

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