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Felix and His Fetish
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Felix and His Fetish |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Felix has a nasty fetish. It’s a knife fetish. He wouldn’t be caught dead without a very sharp knife. Felix can shave with his knife. Yeah, it’s just that sharp. Now some people, they would say— “That boy Felix— he’s crazy over knives.” They all think he’s nuts— but he’s not. No, not really. He just likes sharp knives. He’s like a wolf. He needs those knives to cut. He thinks he better have them. He thinks he might cut you. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
He shall not trust anyone including "you"(me). Because bad life experience has taught him so. But people's disdain of him was more than a sharp knife to his heart and self-esteem. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well the way I see it Bobby... Felix needs those sharp knives to protect him from all the not so nice people he encounters.. and I think there have been a few of those already! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Fetishes like that tend to get people in touble and with an attitude like this feeling in the last two line, worries other people. Weird Felix...But no less so than people with gun fetishes, or fist fitishes....needs to see a psyche, seems to me...but then...most psyche's need to see a psyche in my opinion.... LOL Jimmy |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo TomMark, What’s with this “distain” trip? Felix is very popular. He won’t tolerate any other opinion. Everyone loves Felix—SEE! RDB, Felix says “Thanks for your support. You’re all right.” Jwesley, Felix is more than willing to see a psyche. Felix is just that way, he‘ll always go out of his way to “help” someone. Bobby |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one!!!!!!!! And thank you for your comments on my poetry; your words honor me. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
WindWalker, Thanks so much for bringing this one up. I'm very happy you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Not so much a fetish, but my trusty knife was a tool of the jungle. I don't think Felix wants to cut anyone, but he's ready! Enjoyed reading a part of the evolution of Felix's mind. Art |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hands games naughty games, I hope Felix will not use its knife except for butter and meat... have a nice day yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, "Tool of the Jungle" is a good description. Felix and I have always carried a knife. We only do stuff like peeling apples with our knives. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thank Yann, Yes, Felix has only used his knife for peaceful purposes. He's never cut on anyone. Bobby |
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