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assassin
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0 posted 2008-02-05 09:31 AM



You can get addicted to people just like any addictive,
And overdose, recover and battle on needlessly for years,
But the thing is, unlike drugs, people are dismissive,
That’s when I realised all of my fears,
Now I’m in rehab, trying to forget you,
But what can you do when your broken heart won’t let you?
But you have to draw the line, you have to recover,
Run back to protection, like a child to its mother,
But I still get the feeling u feel something for me,
Oh lord, you blessed me with eyes but its with my mind I must see,
How pathetic I am, misreading signs,
I’m just one of millions with ruined minds,
Im in a spin, im outta control
Im falling into a private hell, and I have no foothold,
Crying out in vain,
Standing in the rain,
A rain of my own crippling depression,
Im sorry, its something I should have mentioned,
A long time ago when you sed you loved me,
But now like a dove, you have set me free,
But im weighed down with my responsibility,
To forget all between us, all that’s teared us apart,
Please go of my fragile bleeding heart.
Memories area like scars, they haunt my soul,
Or whats left of it, im not even whole,
This is enough, I want it to end,
This is enough, im saying goodbye,
I should have expected our love to die
Now I must struggle on alone,
Tormented by the fact that im fading away ,
I may never again see the light of day
Feel the breeze ruffle through my hair
All this cos you forgot how to care.
I am a shadow now.

© Copyright 2008 assassin - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2008-02-05 10:56 AM


Hello, assassin! You've come to the right place! You can pour all of your emotions onto these blue pages and lessen the burden on your broken heart.

May you graduate from your "rehab" a much happier person. A very effective metaphor.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-02-05 04:45 PM


A broken heart is always a mess and you show this clearly in your words.
When we depend on others for our happiness we are bound to remain unhappy. Discover the beauty in you, your soul is always whole and only asks you to be aware of it.

Wishing you well.
love
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-02-05 04:54 PM


Nice flow of emotions...nobody likes to lose someone they love but the alternative is not good...trying to love someone that doesn't want to love you in return is no fun and a waste of your love...James
Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2008-02-05 05:08 PM


welcome to passions.....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-02-05 05:31 PM


Enjoyed your Post!

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2008-02-05 08:37 PM



That is a very sad poem Assassin and I do feel for you, but always remember things

are never as bad as they seem and one day the sun will shine again. I wish you luck.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2008-02-05 09:07 PM


Welcome to our pages blue...I'm sure we will see some great posts from you... sending you some sunshine and smiles to brighten your day....   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
8 posted 2008-02-21 11:18 AM


Welcome aboard!!!  This is a very true piece as many have shared these feelings.  A broken heart is a fragile thing and time will mend it.  Enjoyed reading this, could relate to it very well as I just had my heart broken.  
effjayel
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9 posted 2008-02-21 11:30 AM


Welcome Assassin, Yes it it does have a sadness to it, but many of us here have been there & are still around. Time is a great healer and although in the here & now it seems like the pain will last forever, it won't...look for the light at the end of the tunnel,...Take care & I look forward to seeing more of your posts.

John


"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
10 posted 2008-02-22 12:43 PM


Welcome to Passions,
Your heartpour was a very effective expression of these feelings of loss.
TD

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11 posted 2008-02-22 01:04 PM


Welcome to PIP. this is a sad poem but you've come to the right place to pour out your emotions and frustrations lol.

Hope things get better,

Zach

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