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Open Poetry #42

Love Sans Desire

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-02-04 04:03 PM

Love Sans Desire

Sometimes love may ask more of you
than you are willing to give
and than you might miss the
call of love and talk bad
of love and say that
love doesn't exist.
If you don't want
to give or receive
love, possess no desire
to live love, then don't be
surprised to watch love die,
for love sans desire has
no will to survive.

JamesLee
04February
2008

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2008-02-04 04:19 PM

No, it doesn't does it?

I enjoyed reading your work again.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-02-04 05:01 PM

James,

This is well written, and I see no problems with it at all.

What you say is very true.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-02-04 05:37 PM

very true James! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-04 07:23 PM

Enjoyed JamesMichael

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-02-05 06:59 AM

thank you Temptress, Bobby, Roniece and Artic Wind for the wonderful responses...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-02-05 05:07 PM

ahh yes, dear James, the fire wants to be kindled ...

this is wise!

love
Margherita

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