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The cooking class
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The cooking class |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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The cooking class She tells you That kitchen is a place Alike a writing desk. The worm foods are poetry that a chef creates. She tells you to mix Ingredients in a bowl of Lovely porcelain White as the stillness of her pearls. She shows you how to mix. You have yawned after the 1st class! She overlooks prodigal’s flickers. She shows you to warm the pot To pour a slab of butter To fry the vegetables No, no. Just a bit of red She showed you. Back at the house You have tried And tried The closest of the imitation Only to find a placid taste. She has not told you The key ingredient: A bit of whipped love. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Good, good. The ending is right, my friend. enjoyed the read.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love to cook Foods! Very Much Enjoyed! ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a very lovely write, dear poddarku, bringing back memories of my own cooking class ... the teacher was sort of a witch and we did not like her, but later I felt grateful for what I had learned thanks to her. Nothing goes without Love!! love Margherita |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Really enjoyed this...! My favourite of yours yet...! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love to cook! ~ and from now on I will add some "whipped love" as an integral ingredient in all the meals that I prepare! Thanks for the tip!  A delightful poem! Love & Happy Cooking! EA  |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
thank you all. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is a delightful read...thank you Po, yes, I think all cooking has to have the right amount of 'love' in it RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable 'nicely seasoned' write! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Po, book me a table near the window with a view of the ocean, I'm on my way over....... |
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Zyskandar A. Jaimot Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 76FL-USA |
to p - glad you have not reverted to the too often used ING fake gerunds good job thanks for sharing regards zaj |
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