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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-02-04 06:26 AM



the way our highways bend
like they are a lover's curves
on purposely shaping
for the thrill of our touring
sometimes too fast

and other times
so very slowly
so we can both look down
and enjoy the view
of where we want to end up

and then you look at me
with the silly grin
and ask if there is any place
I would rather be
than riding in your mind

and before I can even speak
you point at the tree of dreams
and ask if I would enjoy stopping
just for a lifetime or two
since we are lost in time

and need to practice resting


_____________

daark

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2008-02-04 06:32 AM


lost in time~~~

yes that decribes it perfectly


M

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-02-04 06:36 AM


ms MMs, thanks babe...it does seem that way doesn't it sometimes
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-02-04 06:40 AM


and before I can even speak
you point at the tree of dreams
and ask if I would enjoy stopping
just for a lifetime or two
since we are lost in time


ah, lost in time with you Mr Daark? so very very nice... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-02-04 06:44 AM


ms r & b...thanks ms, and no, I won't stop anyone and ask directions..
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5 posted 2008-02-04 10:45 AM


Some say nothing is perfect - I disagree.  This poem is an example that they are wrong!

A

TomMark
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6 posted 2008-02-04 12:36 PM


another wonderful poem. very Romantic.
just beautiful.

Tom

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2008-02-04 04:50 PM


you make me snap some of the coolest pictures in my mind that one could ever have the pleasure of envisioning....

your words are true art m'friend...

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-02-04 05:15 PM


ms ali-san, thank you hon for the eyes and words, you bless me

___________

tomMark, thank you my friend

____________

ms gs, thanks babe for the touch

Margherita
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9 posted 2008-02-05 06:47 AM


"pause-ability" a fantastic title for an equally fantastic poem ... to get lost in!

love
Margherita

Angel4aKing
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10 posted 2008-02-05 05:06 PM


Now you made my eyes tear up....you shouldn't go around making girls cry you know...lol  

~~~kingsangel~~~

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-02-05 05:30 PM


Very Romantic Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

icequeen
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12 posted 2008-02-05 09:58 PM


My, my, my... the things you make me think! Makes me take a long deep breath in and let it out slow.

just for a lifetime or two
since we are lost in time

and need to practice resting


Mmmmm-hmmmmmm. (In Southern, that means its really, really, really good!)
~Caroline~

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-02-06 06:19 AM


ms mar, thank you dear lady for the read

____________

artic one, thank you for the eye touch

_________________

ms angel, thanks for the read ms


_______________

ms Ice, thank you lady C for the southern whisper

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