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A Prayer
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A Prayer |
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Cendrine New Member
since 2008-01-06
Posts 6Manitoba, Canada |
From the depth of man’s heart, A life line is penciled in. Was it God’s might or simply Some kind of uninvited wish? We’ll draw it again, if needs be. Born-again religions will keep coming, Sins and damnation will still be used, And anger will be the word of the day. We need something else, We need something else. Now, let there be light! (c)2007 Cendrine Marrouat Cendrine Marrouat |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Cendrine, Light, reason, and kindness always work. Good poem, I like it loads. Keep up the good writing. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like this too, Cendrine. You are so right. We need something else. Something that does't require killing if we don't agree with it. Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
enjoyed. and you are right! Tom |
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Cendrine New Member
since 2008-01-06
Posts 6Manitoba, Canada |
Thanks a lot for the positive feedback! Cendrine Marrouat |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Cendrine, I like the passion in your poetry. And I, too, agree with you. Alison |
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