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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-02-02 06:44 PM


‘Unsteady’ is…

An aging oak
in the Winter
   wind…

An old heart
facing new
   Love…

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (02-03-2008 11:44 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-02-02 06:49 PM


Happy Valentines Month
Margherita
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2 posted 2008-02-02 06:52 PM


Dare to face this new love, it will steady you!! (whether you are speaking of yourself here or generally ... ).

Enjoyed this greatly.

love
Margherita

Bobby Jordan
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3 posted 2008-02-02 08:02 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

This is good work.  

The fear of falling goes away with maturity.  People get over it.

Bobby Steeplejack

TomMark
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4 posted 2008-02-02 08:25 PM


very good.
sigh. The Month of love!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-02-02 09:17 PM


Fear is a warning...love is a calling...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-02-03 05:59 AM


beautiful Bruce!!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-03 11:29 AM


ouuuuuu!

I like the aging oak part! lol



ARCTIC WIND

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8 posted 2008-02-03 11:40 AM


This is wonderful !
I'd listen to Bobby, though.
I think he knows what he's talking about.
(smiling)

passing shadows
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9 posted 2008-02-03 02:15 PM


indeed, that's exactly what it is

well versed!

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