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Clothed In A Shadow's Breath
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Clothed In A Shadow's Breath |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Clothed In A Shadow’s Breath The hush of half light ushers dim Darkness whispers just of him Gold, a dressing gown of stars Stirring spirits brisk of Mars In his essence sinew gleams Fragrance winsome through her dreams Heartbeats glide the half light sky Darkness yearns in lullaby In abstentia clear details On and on til morning trails The hush of half light ushers dim When darkness whispers just of him Copyright Kkh 2/1/08 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful writing TD. Much enjoyed this. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
You have captured the wisp of that shadow so perfectly, and with such heart, T.D., I could feel it. This is just lovely. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Methinks this is a shadow I'd like to meet! Beautiful writing. Passionate.  ~alyssa Hupomeno. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
a very wonderful piece and I like the ending with repeat of beginning. Beautiful. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Impeccably done Kath, do love this poem much, Flow is awesome. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, this is an incredibly sensual ~ yet very pure ~ write. You are a very talented poetess and I enjoy everything of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. I am going back for another read. Sweet dreams! Linda  |
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