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The Ache of Lapis Dawn
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The Ache of Lapis Dawn |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The Ache of Lapis Dawn Time is, itself, but a trickster Calls in ambiguous tone Colors intrinsic the picture Rising and setting alone Knowing beyond recognition Feelings of scenic malaise Slipping beyond inhabition Softly within morning haze Silence itself a redemption Tender caress of the eye Stalled by innate apprehension Left on the lips just a sigh Treasure of pearl laden daylight I, with impetuous heart Anticipate with clear insight The ache of lapis dawn art Copyright Kkh 2/2/08 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Perfect as well, as always...never a disappointment. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
quote: I loved this TD, especially the line I've bolded. Indeed...that is truly a perfect line!! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
perfect. love the read. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed your beautiful words ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Breathtakingly beautiful, dear TD! love Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of: "Rising and setting alone Knowing beyond recognition Feelings of scenic malaise Slipping beyond inhabition Softly within morning haze Silence itself a redemption" and, I must concur with 'Gentle Spirit' the last line above is particularly superb! applause! |
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