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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2008-02-02 10:19 AM






The world erupted from dark to light
Everything I knew was turned inside out
Holding you now in the crook of my arm
Smiling down on your soft countenance
Sweeping lavendar scented curls
A tiny pink nightgown hangs on the line


She'll call me Grandmother

© Copyright 2008 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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1 posted 2008-02-02 10:28 AM


Congratulations Nana Trivett.....What is Her name?
TinaTrivett
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2 posted 2008-02-02 11:02 AM


Thanks. Her name is Samaya Free.
simon
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3 posted 2008-02-02 11:03 AM


I agree, this is lovely & many congrats...
TomMark
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4 posted 2008-02-02 11:27 AM


beautiful baby.
congratulation!

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-02-02 11:40 AM


Congrats to you!

ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-02-02 11:42 AM


I just wanna say: AWWW!!
Can't help but smile with this one.
Lovely writing, adorable granddaughter.


~alyssa

Hupomeno.

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7 posted 2008-02-02 12:10 PM


She's precious! Congratulations of becoming a grandmother! Enjoy watching her grow up.

May her life be one of Love, Light, Harmony, Prosperity and Joy!



EA

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8 posted 2008-02-02 02:50 PM


Tina,

I am thrilled for you.  What a beautiful baby!

I hope that you put this poem in a special poetry book for your granddaughter.  I have a feeling that many will follow this one.

Love this so much.

A

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9 posted 2008-02-02 03:11 PM


Tina~
Little Samaya is totally precious~

Oh, is this not the most wonderful feeling in our lives, or what ?

Yes ... it surely is~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Margherita
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10 posted 2008-02-02 03:50 PM


Congratulations, dear Tina, for the arrival of beautiful little Samaya Free!

She is a delight and I know how overwhelming the experience is!

God bless!

love and joy
Margherita

TinaTrivett
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11 posted 2008-02-02 03:52 PM


Thank you all for the kind comments.. She is such a blessing to our family. We couldn't be happier.
Marchmadness
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12 posted 2008-02-02 07:29 PM


Congratulations, Tina. Beautiful Baby. My greatgranddaughter is three now and a true joy. I hope your new grandchild brings you as much joy as she brings to me.
                                  Love,
                                     Ida

LindsayP
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13 posted 2008-02-02 10:51 PM



Congratulations to you dear Tina on having such a beautiful granddaughter. I hope she

grows up just like her Granny, Thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2008-02-03 05:22 AM


Samaya... beautiful name, beautiful poem for your beautiful granddaughter Tina... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TinaTrivett
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15 posted 2008-02-03 08:54 PM


Thank you all so much..
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