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hounding of honey cones |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you didn't mind the doors how they were open with no handles or locks and the windows too did they seem to overlook the eyes of any passer by almost intrusively inviting you said my buttons were easy and you could undo my puzzle with your eyes closed but you enjoyed watching my face to see it when I saw heaven but refused to enter right then unless you tried even harder to pull me from within myself I guess it was your laughter in knowing the rules of the game and knowing how to break them that made those hours helpless and made me want to help ruin you too ___________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I guess it was your laughter in knowing the rules of the game and knowing how to break them that made those hours helpless yes, life has rules Mr Daark and some, are just meant to be broken I think! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: that must be a bad idea I guess, putting you into a bad mood, DS!   ... si salvi chi può ...  For some doors and windows that close, new ones will open.  love Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
quote: Lovely....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b, thanks for the smiles ms __________ ms mar, never a bad mood hon...part of the pleasure is the revealing, thanks ms _________ ms gs, thank you donna dear for your eyes |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
enjoyed this.... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I guess it was your laughter in knowing the rules of the game and knowing how to break them that made those hours helpless.." I like this ending a lot!  Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I am glad I read this one....wow!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, I think that reading your poetry is like holding a secret - it is so intimate and let's me feel as if I am there - whether riding or (grins) ain't going to the "or" .. know what I mean? It's a special quality that you have in your writing. And "ali-san" makes me smile huge. A |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
This is a very very good poem. It gave a moment of "yes, yes". Love the read. The door can be opened through the window The heaven can be felt within the buttoned puzzle the game shall be won by ignoring the rules. Mr. Dark |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
I like this one...K |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
those hounds will get you every time  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe ____________ friend Artic, thanks for the read and thoughts ____________ ms Angel, thank you for riding along _____________ ms ali-san...your smiles make the wolf pace his edges, thanks babe _________________ Friend TomMark, thanks sir for the read __________ ms Clang, thanks lady friend for your eyes _____________ ms inky, they are insatiable aren't they, thanks ms |
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