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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-02-02 01:51 AM


Two four year old girls, one with brown hair, one blonde
Took such delight in picking poppies they found
Colorful blossoms grew tall, warmed by the sun
Annie and Alison on a mission of fun
They didn’t know the flowers were tended with care
They only saw flowers to put in their hair
They only saw flowers to pick and take home
They didn’t know the flowers were lovingly grown

The two little girls ran innocently free
That’s how it was for my friend, Annie, and me

A voice would call out from a house that was near
An old lady lived there; her voice rang out clear
“Annie and Alison, don’t pick those poppies you see.
I planted that garden - you girls just leave them be!”

They looked at the lady and ran as fast as they could
How she could own poppies that grew in the woods?

More flowers grew, bathed in colors vibrant and bright
The girls would return within the old woman’s sight
She could see them run up to stay for awhile
They never looked to see her face lit with a smile
All they would hear, with flowers held in their hands,
Was the voice calling out, at the door she would stand
“Annie and Alison, don’t pick those poppies you see.
I planted that garden - you girls just leave them be!”

The years have gone by and the girls since moved away
But poppies still whisper the words the woman would say
“Annie and Alison, don’t pick those poppies you see.
planted that garden - you girls just leave them be!”


Alison


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-02 01:53 AM


smiles.... Ali.. this is DELIGHTFUL! thank you for sharing it with us... are you sure  you didn't see any penguins in that garden though?  LOL    love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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2 posted 2008-02-02 01:54 AM


Nice...James
Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2008-02-06 01:28 AM


Thank you, my friends.

My sister says that I left out the best part, which is:

"But you left out the part I truly love--When I asked you what Mrs. Soldberg said when you committed your acts of larceny, you told me,"She said nice little girls, you may pick my flowers."

So she says I need to edit this .. we may see it again.

Alison

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