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zacubus
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since 2007-09-08
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0 posted 2008-02-02 12:21 PM



Everything was perfect without a flaw when it began,
it may be hard to believe but so was man.
There was no evil or burning hate,
just love and joy in a blissful state.
And peace on earth was not a dream it was real,
everything was in harmony according to his will.
Things would have always remained this way,
if we to his words would not disobey.
But we obeyed not  and commited the very first sin,
and then did the great fall of man begin.
now nothing in this world is perfect anymore,
there is no peace just continual war.
Every single day somebody does kill,
and many people go without water or a meal.
Evil in this world just continues to grow,
and goodness of the Lord fewer and fewer know.
But put up with it much longer God will not,
and only he knows how much time we have got.
So do not doubt that returning is he,
for he is and his face all shall see.
And in that day the earth will quake and tremble it will,
and every single knee to the Lord will kneel.
So what shall you say that day while upon your knees,
when your  every ounce of strength and pride  from the Lord flees.

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2008-02-02 01:52 AM


Enjoyed...James
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