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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-02-01 05:12 PM


Winter Void (II)

empty spaces…

love left…

with twilight
ice rings
melting into
  dawn

longing arrived…
with mind-tuning
sorrows

so many things
finally seem real
only when lost

so many things
truly become useful
only when empty

marvel at the
intensity and
  richness
of the void!


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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-02-01 05:15 PM


with twilight
ice rings
melting into
  dawn............"

This is a very beautiful part in the poem.
very Descriptive and Beautifully put

ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-02-01 05:52 PM


when July steams the sidewalks,
we will remember a February ice storm
and smile

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-01 06:25 PM


Yes! Winter is so rich in its emptiness.

Beautiful and wise.

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-02-01 07:22 PM


"so many things
finally seem real
only when lost"

~ Alas, that too oft be true...


Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-02-01 07:52 PM


beautiful words Bruce... always beautiful words... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2008-02-02 12:42 PM


I agree with Midnitesun.

"so many things
finally seem real
only when lost"

This conveys the essence of and reason for most art. Winter gives us the opportunity to experience it. Beautifully written.

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