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zacubus
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since 2007-09-08
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0 posted 2008-02-01 01:15 PM



It seems to be a world out of control,
where few care about their immortal soul.
Instead their lives they do abuse,
living for themselves the way they choose.
Never heeding to valuable advice,
thinking its to high a price.
But there are consequences for not doing as you are told,
whether you are young or old.
And after you let all your chances pass,
and you are put six feet under grass.
The end result is always the same,
for eternity will not remember your name.

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-02-01 01:19 PM


And after you let all your chances pass,
and you are put six feet under grass."

Interesting Write

ARCTIC WIND

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