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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2008-02-01 10:51 AM


I was asked to repost this, so here goes..

In a Pennsylvania pasture, on a blue sky kind of day
The devil came to Nickel Mines, and took the girls away
The tender tiny darlings, in their bonnets and white gowns
The most innocent of innocence, now buried in the ground
The elders grieved, the mothers cried, the fathers held their breath
How could they have predicted, the killings and the death
Forgiveness came in the same gasp, as did their grief and pain
The Amish know their God is near, they'll see them all again
In a Pennsylvania pasture, on a blue sky kind of day
The devil came to Nickel Mines, and took the girls away

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simon
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1 posted 2008-02-01 10:55 AM


Really pleased you were and did...
passing shadows
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2 posted 2008-02-01 11:02 AM


sad stuff

glad you reposted this, I missed it before

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-01 11:57 AM


Very Sad indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2008-02-01 11:58 AM


Sad beyond sad ~ and mad beyond mad.

You conveyed this tragic story with sensitivity and grace.


EA

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5 posted 2008-02-02 04:20 PM


I remember when you first posted this and I cried because you captured this moment in time with perfection.

It stands strong and remains beautiful - and sad.

Alison

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6 posted 2008-02-02 07:40 PM


Fine writing...James
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