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Open Poetry #42

true blue of dreams

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-02-01 10:21 AM

True blue of dreams
A white pigeon and a black pigeon
On a distant T.V. antenna,
Just now sun comes down upon its wings
Pecks and eats peanuts out of my hand.
One has unveiled the intone of grief somewhere.
The quivering violin
That some one is playing
Waving through the alley.
The alley of a missing Sunday is quite.
Evil one eye of a tomcat
That has been maimed by a spirited kitty
Crying out its hunger
From this side to that side of the passage .
A passage of time
None has crossed it ever.
The feverish terrace of old house
Smiles with deception.
This is an alley
With a white pigeon and a black pigeon.
This is the alley
Where roams Cyclopes cats
And, abstract violins.
This is a missing sun
                                                                Day
                                                               I have only seen
                                                                  In the bluest of my dreams.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-01 11:53 AM

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-02-01 05:29 PM

A very good write, poddarku! The blue mood is well rendered. Poor tomcat! Why do you say his one eye is evil? (I am a cat lover!) Of course I know cats can be absolutely disquieting in some of their attitudes. And if there are pigeons around and the cat is hungry ... well we know! It's sad, but it is nature.

love
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-02-02 06:00 AM

I'm not sure I have extended a welcome to you on our pages blue... welcome Poddarku ..

I enjoyed this work of yours... be well RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

4 posted 2008-02-02 11:15 AM

beautiful. a sense of chill though.
enjoyed all your poems.

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