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howardtsu
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0 posted 2008-01-31 07:30 PM



Eve remembered that sunny day

when Howard looked away

she never did get a chance to say what was on her mind

how did she get so far behind?

it wasn’t even inning #9

but Howard still insisted on pitching that now infamous winning line

howard :

                           i love you Eve!!!!!!!

                               [grinning back]

                           [while sliding into first]

                           i love you too Howard!!!!!!!



                          Eve pressed rewind

josh :

                           may i ………. ?

eve :

                           sure

                           Eve hands Josh the I-Pod Nano

                           [Josh Whistles]

                           whew …………….

                           i wish i had met you first

                                  [Eve smiles]

                                  thanks Josh

josh :

                           when does Howard get back?

eve :

                           April 1st



                                   [meanwhile]

howard :

                           don’t skip the details Skip

                           if Eve was in my hip pocket

                           i’d know

skip :

                           alright, don’t say i didn’t tell you so

                                   [Jay cuts in]

                           and that’ll do it for this Friday's episode of 1st & 10

                           [Howard & Skip still clearly agitated]

                           will Howard ever see Eve grin again?

                           a question for next time perhaps

                                   [back at T.G.I. Friday's]

                           Eve do you think it’s quite possible this situation between you and Howard is over-exaggerated?

                           believe me Josh if me running his bases still kept Howard elated

                                               i’d know



                                                                                                     love,

                                                                                                     eve & howard

          



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-31 07:46 PM


oh no, Howard never over exaggerates about his darling Eve!   lovely Howard! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

howardtsu
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2 posted 2008-02-01 03:46 PM


thanks roniece
Bob K
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3 posted 2008-02-03 02:23 AM


Dear howardtsu,

           Reading this reminded me, oddly enough, of Catullus.

If you've seen his stuff, forgive me.  If not, perhaps you can find a good translation and treat yourself.

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-03 11:27 AM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-02-03 02:16 PM


Fun reading this...James
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